Community Authors – Creative Writing Lessons – Flowing Choreography

 
I’ve stressed the importance of action in our writing, and a lot of times that action is the characters moving around a scene. Generally, there’s a lot of it in a book and often it’s not done very well. Many times, there’s a lack of originality, because we just want to move the story forward. Who cares how she walks across the room? She just does.

I find the level of detailed choreography required in a scene somewhat subjective, depending on the reader and the author’s intent.

Take these sentences for example…
 

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